LO4: Feedback from the writers group

I had a disucssion with the writers group and they gave me some feedback on the script that I have written for Me And My Disability

1.I have used a nice balance on Cerebral Palsy becuase I represent Josh as Josh and show what he can do not what he can't do.

2.When I have a voice over displayed on the script they are appropriatly timed along with the cut aways from the scene to make this a shooting script.

3. The writers group agreed with me is saying that this is a real story and can impact people in different ways this is also a social issue and also the fundementals of the topic.

4. 12+ is the appropriate target audience to this subject because any younger than this thay may not understand why Josh walsk with sticks but some do and may find this sensitive to watch.

5.  Add in shot types camera angles and movements maybe add in some music notify weather this is faded in or out.

LO3: Actors feedback

I felt like this was appropriate to be in contact with Josh over the script because this documentary is all about Josh I wanted to make this as genuine as possible and with the use of Josh and the feedback I can get from him this script can be relatble to so many people.

LO3: Be able to produce a scripted element of a media product in response to a client brief

LO3: Production Schedule

LO2: Production Schedule

LO2: My final idea

From the mindmap of ideas that I have I have decided to go with me and my disability that is about a 19 year old boy who has cerbral palsy and he tells us about his story on his life and him dealing with cerebral palsy.

I have decided on making this documentray because Josh is actually a close friend of mine and I wanted to make a documentary that interseted me not one that made me bored within the first miniute. So I have taken on a big challange but I know I can pull this off with a good script.

LO2 storyboards