1.I have used a nice balance on Cerebral Palsy becuase I represent Josh as Josh and show what he can do not what he can't do.
2.When I have a voice over displayed on the script they are appropriatly timed along with the cut aways from the scene to make this a shooting script.
3. The writers group agreed with me is saying that this is a real story and can impact people in different ways this is also a social issue and also the fundementals of the topic.
4. 12+ is the appropriate target audience to this subject because any younger than this thay may not understand why Josh walsk with sticks but some do and may find this sensitive to watch.
5. Add in shot types camera angles and movements maybe add in some music notify weather this is faded in or out.
